The challenge
Dialogue between a young noblewoman and a maid used inconsistent forms of address and an unsuitable register.
Giving Japanese dialogue a consistent character voice
Match wording, forms of address, and punctuation to the characters and their relationship.
Anonymized work example
The approach
Revise wording, punctuation and politeness to reflect the relationship and the intended character voice. Record the choices in character language guidance.
The deliverable
Revised Japanese dialogue and reusable voice guidance for subsequent scenes. The excerpt below is drawn from the supplied service example.
Short excerpt from the service example
Before
あんまり怒るなよ。お嬢様。After
どうか落ち着いてくださいませ、お嬢様。Short excerpt from the service example