The challenge
A long explanation mixed capture, territory changes, restrictions, rescue and shield rules. A literal translation preserved the information but made the action sequence hard to scan.
Making strategy-game rules easier to follow
Separate the attacker’s actions from the prisoner’s options so players can find the relevant rule.
Anonymized work example
The approach
Group the explanation under ATTACKER and PRISONER, then use Occupation, Rescue and Shield subheadings. Check terminology against the actual mechanic.
The deliverable
Reorganized English rules with clear sections for each player role.
Short excerpt from the service example
Before
Players may choose to pay a Ransom to escape the Prisoner of War status. After successfully escaping, they will receive a 12-hour Shield.After
Rescue
The captured lord can pay a ransom to escape the Prisoner of War status.
Shield
After successfully being rescued, the lord will receive a 12-hour Shield.Short excerpt from the service example